[No title yet] - Any reccomendations??
Please, I beg of you to read, and review. I really need some critizism and praise.
(And I've written in a very diffrent way...as you will see. I've always loved the way poems are structured, and decided to see how it would turn out if I used the same technique with writing. Oh well, you decide.
Perhaps some distant glimpse of peace, she mused.
However, no. As if deliberately defying all laws of normality, it was more like an explosion of darkness. Like the wind itself, the darkness wrapped around her tiny frame, encircling her, whispering through her dry hair, overpowering her with the fear it pierced through her heart, worsening the cracks that had already formed there.
It claimed her,
It suffocated her.